Tuesday, March 4, 2014

BITE ME

THE THE TIME WHEN GOT BIT
There was a young boy named Jaquan Schroeder. He was walking home one day and he saw this cute dog chained up to his house.He was petting the pitbull for 4 seconds.Then the dog started to growl at him so he backed up. After it stopped growling at him, he went back up and petted it again. The dog bit him in his face.He also said it looked like it was in slow motion to him.His mom heard him yelling and she saw that his face was all bloody. His mom called the ambulance and they came and they put him in the ambulance and his mom asked if she could go with. They told his mom no and then they said you have to drive a car. So she did.


He went to Mercy Medical Center and they said they said they can't do his plastic surgery. So he had to go to Neenah and had to get his plastic surgery. His mom and dad finally arrived. He had his plastic surgery. They told him that he had to get stitches. He got over 162 stitches and after that he said that he was sorry for getting close to that dog. His mom said its ok .They said that he needed some shots. Mom said ok. It turned out to be 21 shots because of rabies and other  stuff. Mom took him home and they gave him one more shot for the stress of pain to go away.
It turned out they did not go home. He had to sleep in this McDonald’s hotel because he had been far from home. They served us dinner. We had steak and fries and hamburger. When we got in his room it was just like a game room. Games were everywhere. Him and his dad were the first one’s on the games. There was a Xbox 360 and we played the game all night until morning. After we were done we went down to eat breakfast. After breakfast we went home. I  walking to my room and  take a nap.
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 6, 2014 at 9:16 AM

    I really liked this story, i thought it was a tad bit unrealistic, but still fascinating how dog's behave sometimes. Great story !

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  2. AnonymousMarch 11, 2014 at 9:29 AM

    Its a good story but at the end of your story it was pretty lame but over all the story was good

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