Wednesday, March 26, 2014

FireGirl

In my book fire Girl she's has a really bad burn she came to the new school and everyone think's that she's different than everyone but this boy name tom has the gut's to go talk to here and now in this book is friends with her but the bad part of this book is that Jessica's parent's all way's blaming each other because of that fire and she has to throw this for the rest of her life.When Jessica's parent's are blaming each other she feel's sad and she probable hate's her parent's talking about the fire so Tom help's her get throw her problem and talk's to her and he had the gut's to go to her house and give her her homework.What people do not know is that Jessica is really special to someone.Tom talked to Jessica's dad they talked for a while but he really wanted to leave but he did not want to stop her dad from talking.?What I was wondering is why is he scared to say that he has to go in stead of being scared and say something.The Started When her mom was driving to the dance to sigh up Jessica and this truck/car came and crash and she was in the car and it blow up and Jessica came on Fire and she got on fire.At the end she has to go to a different school and Tom was really getting to no her and i wonder if tom is going to miss her
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  1. AnonymousApril 15, 2014 at 10:40 AM

    I think you did great but try to put your punctuation's in, and try spelling more accurately.

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  2. AnonymousApril 29, 2014 at 10:28 AM

    Ok

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  3. AnonymousJune 10, 2014 at 10:42 AM

    This seems interesting, even when it is talking about rights among people. I will try to read this when I get my hands on the book. How did Jessica get those burns? Was she born with it?

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